Chris~ It's good! Haha~ Love the start of your narration. But the later parts I think you need to re-record. Not as emo and touching as the start somehow. The song is great. Pace is great. The empty spaces and you disappearing spaces are great too. But certain elements like your that laughing pig if you hadn't told me it was a gift between you two most prob won't get it. - pei
i love the last part! where u said ur first love will always be her..and u showed a sketch of her. brilliant! =) oh and how did u make the transition of the guy disappearing so smooth? =x
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Chris~ It's good! Haha~ Love the start of your narration. But the later parts I think you need to re-record. Not as emo and touching as the start somehow. The song is great. Pace is great. The empty spaces and you disappearing spaces are great too. But certain elements like your that laughing pig if you hadn't told me it was a gift between you two most prob won't get it. - pei
i love the last part! where u said ur first love will always be her..and u showed a sketch of her.
brilliant! =)
oh and how did u make the transition of the guy disappearing so smooth? =x
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